You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter •explain why you think you would be suitable for the job •say what else you could do for the family •give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to hire me as a language tutor for your children. My name is Rohit Sharma, graduated in history from PU University in 2020.
Also
, I have an early care childhood certificate with 4 years of experience and teaching skills. I have some references that can prove my teaching abilities.
As well as
, I can
also
teach your children some subjects like mathematics, History, and English which may help to increase your chances of cracking exams and
overall
development.
Furthermore
, I know these days parents are busy with their jobs during your business hours, I can take care of your children by giving them healthy food.
In addition
, I can play with them because I won some prizes at college-level games. I need
this
job part-time because I am from a poor family, and to give them a good life, I am looking for
this
opportunity. And, I believe in exchanging our culture, traditions, roots, and language that these days students don't know much about it.
Moreover
, I become a child in their company. Hoping for a prompt response from your side regarding
this
job. Yours sincerely, Rohit Sharma
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Double-check the letter for small grammatical errors and typos.
coherence cohesion
Clear and appropriate greeting and closing.
task achievement
Addresses all parts of the task effectively.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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