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university students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. what are the advantages and disadvantages?

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The students at universities are increasing for
student exchange programme
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a student exchange programme
student exchange programmes
 as a part of their
degrees
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degree
.
Although
, students find it difficult to cope with
new environment
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the new environment
a new environment
 and new methods of learning while abroad, they will gain deep knowledge in their subject and that will reward them in the future of their careers. In my opinion, students studying abroad will have more chance to explore and can master in what they do.
Therefore
, advantages outweighs the disadvantages.
To begin
 with, students studying abroad helps to gain more knowledge on different subjects which may not available in their home country.
In addition
 to that, the exchange of ideas from different people all around the world will help them to shape their career in the future.
For instance
, when I studied in
indonesia where
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Indonesia, where
Indonesia where
 I need to work for a project which is a part of our academic curriculum with people from
differentcontinents
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different continents
. So, it helped me to cope with various people when I joined as an employee in a major firm.
Therefore
, studying abroad helps to learn many things. On the other side, there are some things which they often find it difficult when moving to other countries for the academic purpose. One of the main
problem
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problems
 is the method of learning; it may vary from their home country.
Secondly
,
the
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The
 laws that are in place which is entirely different from their own place.
For example
, when I completed my research paper in
thailand
a country of southeastern Asia that extends southward along the Isthmus of Kra to the Malay Peninsula
Thailand
, it was rejected because the paper which I submitted is not following the local standards.
these
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These
 are the
down sides
a negative aspect of something that is generally positive
downsides
 of studying abroad. Studying overseas has become incredibly common
from
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for
 past ten years.
while
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While
 students abroad find it hard to cope with new
environment
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environment, however
however
, these
situation
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situations
brings
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bring
 best out of them. In my opinion, studying abroad has more advantages than disadvantages.
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