when a country develops its technologies, the traditional skills and ways of living die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion?

Tradition is

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the soul

of a nation. It attracts tourism and businesses

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in

the country. But with

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the development

of

technology

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, traditional skills and ways of

life

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are dying out. Some people believe that it is pointless to try and keep them alive. Well, I totally disagree

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belief.

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essay will contradict the above point of view and will provide supporting points for the same. Some people believe that the old ways of

life

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and traditions are outdated and needs to be changed. According to them, the authentic methods are not being able to cope up with the new fast moving

life

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because the latest technologies are far more convenient and fast.

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, older techniques of agriculture required more patience and man force, these might not be able to

fulfill

put in effect

fulfil

the needs of today's large population.

Nowadays most

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Nowadays, most

of the

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agricultural

tasks like cultivation, irrigation, sowing are all done with the help of machines.

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quicker

than the prior ones. So,

technology

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gives more convenience and

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faster results which

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are making

people think that it is pointless to keep the previous methods.

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, automation is helping in advanced

lifestyles but

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lifestyles, but

keeping one's traditional ways of

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is

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important. All the previous techniques had their own significance and maximum times there is some science involved in the background for these.

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, in farming there are natural ways of controlling pests on

crops but

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crops, but

at present farmers only use insecticides and pesticides. These include a lot of chemicals which in turn are consumed by us. Indeed, in a recent survey by

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the Times

of India newspaper, 80% of farmers rely completely on these chemicals

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of trying different natural ways, like

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the old days

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,

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in turn

is indirectly impacting

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has indirectly impacted

indirectly impacts

our lives and making us forget the natural and healthier ways.

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essay argued that it is not pointless to value the traditional skills and ways of

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. And how important it is to respect the earlier methods of living. In conclusion, people should not completely depend on

technology

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for a brighter future

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the older already tested techniques should

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be taken into account.