Artists need a certain amount of freedom o develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas To what extent do you agree or desagree?

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It is believed by some that people who work with
art
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should express all their ideas and thoughts freely. Whereas I agree that artists should be free at
certain level
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a certain level
certain levels
to evolve their creative mind, I
desagree
be of different opinions
disagree
that they should be
alowed
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
allowed
aloud
to create whatever they want without considering
ethique
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Ethique
.
Art
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is a type of
tool not
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tool, not
only used
for comunicating individual
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for communicating with individual
for communicating individual
thoughts,
fellings
emotional or moral sensitivity (especially in relation to personal principles or dignity)
feelings
, but
also
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for
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to
denouncing the current social condition in a community. There are many
remarcable
unusual or striking
remarkable
moments in the History of Humanity that artists played an important role to alert and arise populations against
treats
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treating
and dangers caused by elites and
autorities
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
authorities
. Obviously,
dictatorianship
a form of government in which the ruler is an absolute dictator (not restricted by a constitution or laws or opposition etc.)
dictatorship
goverments
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
governments
governments'
government's
fight
this
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kind of
art
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by
forbiding
harshly uninviting or formidable in manner or appearance
forbidding
forbidden
and banning them. To illustrate
this
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, I could mention the heavy
sensur
a general conscious awareness
sense
legilated
make laws, bills, etc. or bring into effect by legislation
legislated
by the
militar
of or relating to the study of the principles of warfare
military
governent
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
in Brazil in the 60's which sent hundreds of artists to
oversas
beyond or across the sea
overseas
due to the revolutionary and democratic content of their
art
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. On a
polical
involving or characteristic of politics or parties or politicians
political
wise, artists have to be free to criticize governments and denounce social issues.
On the other hand
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, freedom to create
art
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has to have boundaries because
in
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of
society respect and
ethique
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Ethique
ethics
are assets. It is not
aceptable
worthy of acceptance or satisfactory
acceptable
to publish any content that harms and
bulles
an uncultured, aggressive, rude, noisy troublemaker
bullies
balls
others'
fellings
emotional or moral sensitivity (especially in relation to personal principles or dignity)
feelings
filings
on behalf of
art
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.
For example
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, we cannot
denay
declare untrue; contradict
deny
that there are racist and bigoted
poeple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
in our World but allowing them to express their thoughts through
art
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could influence other people to think as the artists and encourage acts of
desrespect
an expression of lack of respect
disrespect
and even violence against a determined group. For
this
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reason, there
ough
expresses an emotional, practical, or other reason for doing something
ought
be laws to regulate the nature of artworks. To conclude,
altough
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
artist
need
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needs
some freedom to
adovocate
push for something
advocate
for their values, they should be regulated by
ehique
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laws since
art
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is a force for good to enhance people's lives. All
kind
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kinds
of prejudice have to be
baned
forbidden by law
banned
from
art
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as all human beings have the same rights.
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