It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Many college students leave their

home

and their family to go to study far away

form

a giver or sender

from

their hometown. I think it is a right choice because let them to grow and confront with new realities. But

move

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the move

is not always easy, sometimes live alone is difficult and many families

can not

cannot

afford a rental house in big

cities so

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cities, so

students have to decide to go to study near

home

to avoid other expenses. Nowadays almost all

colleges

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college

students

leave

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are leaving

their family house to continue their studies

faraway

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far away

from

home

. In my opinion, is an important choice, because they will face an important experience that will let them develop personal aspects and knowing other students with different backgrounds. Colleges are different, in many countries they are provided of dormitory or little apartments where students can live with other roommates. The cost of the accommodation is included in the price of university taxes. Is the best option for a student, he can live with friends and can

concentrates

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concentrate

on his duty. A dormitory there is not always. To give an example, in Italy, my nation, universities are

differents

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

, they are almost all public institutions and university taxes supply barely at the studies. Students have to find an accommodation by themselves, many times to afford the cost of a rental house in a big city they have to find a job. Working during the studies makes difficult pay the right attention on lessons and exams.

Besides there

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Besides, there

are some youths who have to stay at

home

with families because taxes are too expensive. According to me, the study is a right for everyone so governments and colleges have to help everyone to supply the

istruction

a message describing how something is to be done

instruction

. All universities should have a dormitory or apartments for their students. Living

faraway

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far away

from

home

is an important step

for

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life.

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It is better for college students to live far away from home than live at home with their parents. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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