Many countries aim to improve their living standard by economic developnent but some important social values are lost as a result. Do you think advantages of economic development outweigh the disadvantages.
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, high standard of living has become the topmost priority for many nations around the globe; owing to (anthropology) the distinctive spirit of a culture or an era
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this
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,
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,
majority
of countries strive to enhance the living standard of their citizens with economic blossoming but Suggestion
the majority
a majority
as a result
some indispensable moral and social values have seen a set back. In my perspective, the drawbacks certainly seen to be exiguous as compared to its benefits
To commence with, there are numerous benefits of economic development. Linking Words
Firstly
, with economic evolution, the employment opportunities in a Linking Words
country
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rises
. Suggestion
rise
For instance
, more demand of workforce in different sectors of economy like IT, education, banking, infrastructureLinking Words
,
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,
etc
, rises and in order yo fill the vacant positions, unemployed people gets job both in continuing in the same way
etc.
skilled and unskilled sector
. Suggestion
the skilled and unskilled sector
As a result
, the national Linking Words
incomd
of a the financial gain (earned or unearned) accruing over a given period of time
incomes
income
country
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also
increases rapidly in the form of various taxes and charges for providing services. Linking Words
Secondly
, economic Linking Words
upliftment
brings foreign investment into a Suggestion
country
because it attracts the investors to explore the Use synonyms
unutilized
resources of an economy and use its cheap labour. It, indeed, improves the overall living standard of the citizens of a Suggestion
country
.
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Nevertheless
, economic development Linking Words
do impact
a Suggestion
does impact
country
in a negative way. To set in, it is believed that economic enrichment makes people materialistic because they become Use synonyms
workholics
and run after the big chunks of revenue only neglecting their moral and person with a compulsive need to work
workaholics
sovial
ethics. As a consequence, one relating to human society and its members
social
loose
the culture and traditions associated with their roots and try to find happiness solely in Suggestion
looses
materialistic world
.
To Suggestion
a materialistic world
the materialistic world
recapitualize
, I firmly believe that benefits of economic development certainly outweigh its disadvantages as blossoming of an economy bring Suggestion
plethora
of job opportunities and foreign investment into a Suggestion
a plethora
country
which enrich the Use synonyms
lifestylr
of people of a nation.a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
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