The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In 1988, Britain was the

first

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country

were

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where

cars appeared. By 2000, the number of vehicles on British roads increased to about 29 million. Many people believe that international laws and forms of transportation should be

binded

confined by bonds

bound

blinded

bounded

by the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

to the community.

This

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essay will discuss why those rules are important to put.

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of all, some people do not

care

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for other people's lives, they

drive

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without taking

care

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as if there is no one else in the street.

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leads to many accidents and killing people, if there were no laws and punishments for these people, no one will

care

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and

drive

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carefully. As well as, boys do not think wisely, rules should be put for youths to

drive

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in a better way in order not to harm themselves nor the people around them. If the

goverment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

government

did not bind those teenagers

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especially whose age is under 18 years, to follow the forms the percentage of

death

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deaths

caused by accidents will increase. But some laws are not logic or they just concentrate on them more than any other laws that may be more important and safer for the driver. One of these laws is that kids are

forbiden

excluded from use or mention

forbidden

to sit on the front

seat

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,

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but that does not make any sense if the kid was wearing the

seat

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belt it will be safe just as sitting on the back

seat

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. At the end of

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essay, I just want to ask every driver to take

care

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while he/she is driving, wear the

seat

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belt, and do not use your phone

instead

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concentrate on the street and

cars

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the cars

around you. Many parents are waiting their kids, if you cannot be responsible while

driving

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driving, then

then

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do not

drive

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because

people

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peoples'

peoples

souls are valuable.