The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In 1988, Britain was the
first
country
were
In or at or to what place
where
cars appeared. By 2000, the number of vehicles on British roads increased to about 29 million. Many people believe that international laws and forms of transportation should be
binded
confined by bonds
bound
blinded
bounded
by the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
to the community.
This
essay will discuss why those rules are important to put.
First
of all, some people do not
care
for other people's lives, they
drive
without taking
care
as if there is no one else in the street.
This
leads to many accidents and killing people, if there were no laws and punishments for these people, no one will
care
and
drive
carefully. As well as, boys do not think wisely, rules should be put for youths to
drive
in a better way in order not to harm themselves nor the people around them. If the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
did not bind those teenagers
,
Accept space
,
especially whose age is under 18 years, to follow the forms the percentage of
death
Suggestion
deaths
caused by accidents will increase. But some laws are not logic or they just concentrate on them more than any other laws that may be more important and safer for the driver. One of these laws is that kids are
forbiden
excluded from use or mention
forbidden
to sit on the front
seat
,
Accept space
,
but that does not make any sense if the kid was wearing the
seat
belt it will be safe just as sitting on the back
seat
. At the end of
this
essay, I just want to ask every driver to take
care
while he/she is driving, wear the
seat
belt, and do not use your phone
instead
concentrate on the street and
cars
Suggestion
the cars
around you. Many parents are waiting their kids, if you cannot be responsible while
driving
Accept comma addition
driving, then
then
do not
drive
because
people
Suggestion
peoples'
peoples
souls are valuable.
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