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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Some people consider that
species
 extinction of plants and animals is the core environmental problem nowadays. While individual
species
 conservation is crucial, I do agree with those who believe that other environmental issues are more important. On the one hand, it is undeniable that the absence of certain plants and animals is an essential threat these days that leads to many catastrophic results. On land, wild animals are being hunted to extinction for
bushmeat
, decoration, or medicinal products. At sea, huge industrial fishing boats equipped with bottom-trawling or purse-seine nets pulled fish out of the oceans faster than nature can replace them.
Moreover
,
species
-rich wild forests which act as carbon sinks are being destroyed, especially in the tropics, and often have to make way for cattle ranching, soybean or other agricultural monocultures. People would loss the resources of fresh
air
 and animals might have the failure to find a habitat.
Therefore
, the dying-out of individual
species
 of plants and animals is the significant problem which should be tackled with as soon as possible.
On the other hand
, there are more environmental problems we need to concern about
such
 as the polluted
air
 and the
alteration
Suggestion
alter
 of climate. Nowadays, the
air
 pollution is a serious issue which needs to be resolved immediately. From smog hanging over cities to exhaust gas from cars,
air
 pollution poses a major threat to public health and the whole atmosphere.
In addition
, the climate change which could
rise
raise the level or amount of something
raise
 the sea levels and cause more extreme weather conditions will definitely trigger
off
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
 the disappearance of wild animals and endanger the existence of human beings.
Thus
, if the problems mentioned above continue, there is little hope for the future, including both plants, animals and humans. In conclusion, the loss of particular
species
 of plants and animals is obviously a major problem nowadays, but other environmental issues like
air
 pollution and climate change are even more urgent.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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