News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

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The News,

that

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that's

going to get published is decided by editors. They make the decisions based on various factors. They may be good and some may be other way. We shall discuss them, in the later part. Lets discuss regarding the situation's, that influence them in

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paragraph.

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, they don't create panic in the society.

For example

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, if they are going to post the article, regarding

brankrupt

reduce to bankruptcy

bankrupt

of the company. It not only create panic in investors, but

also

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effect

have an effect upon

affect

the business of the competitors. In

this

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case, they are not going to publish entire information at once.

Second

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, If they don't have the complete data regarding the incident. In

this

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case, they are not going to telecast it, as they are not aware of it

completely

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completed

. Coming to

other side

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the other side

, regarding bad news, Many factors may drive to do as so.

Firstly

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, As these people have complete powers on data passing

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into

public, some of them are

utilize

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utilizing

it for own benefit.

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, A bribery resource may have money from one political party and propagate bad news on other parties.

Secondly

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, Misinterpretation, May be they haven't

understand

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understood

the information in a proper way.

This

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may lead to bad NEWS.

For example

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, If a dead man was found on the street.

This

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can be because of accident or else murder. If they interpret, it as

murder

Accept comma addition

murder, then

then

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it's a bad, which is not. In Conclusion, Whatever may be the case, they need to ensure to report good news, so that the readers will have good data.

This

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not only influence the public, but

also

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create good citizens.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

269 words

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Demographics
Engagement
Relevance
Urgency
Natural disasters
Political upheavals
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Market competition
Editorial policies
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Newsworthy
Desensitization
Bad news fatigue
Negativity bias
Balanced view
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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news? Would it be better if more good news was reported?

Your opinion

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People are surrounded by advertising,which has an increasing effect in our daily lives.Do you think the positive effects of this outweigh the negative effects?

In many countries, the government likes to spend more money on the arts. Some people agree with this. However, others think government should spend more on health and education. Discuss both sides and giver your opinion.

People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, many people spend a lot of money on weddings. Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?