Some people think that the Olympics is no longer important in the 21st century. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

These days, it is often argued that the Olympics
is
Suggestion
are
no longer relevant in the present era. Despite having its origin in unpopular ancient's believes, I disagree with
this
notion because
this
sporting event helps to promote
tourism
and
world
peace.
Firstly
, the Olympics supports
tourism
as it brings people from various parts of the
world
together for the sporting event. Both the host cities and visitors benefit tremendously as
such
cities experience massive infrastructural development to attract tourists and the tourists are offered the opportunity to visit sites previously unknown to them.
For instance
, the Sydney Olympics in 2000 enlightened people about the beautiful city of
sydney
the largest Australian city located in southeastern Australia on the Tasman Sea; state capital of New South Wales; Australia's chief port
Sydney
and Australia.
As a result
, Australia experienced a surge in
tourism
. If there were no Olympics in 2000, Sydney may not have been in the spotlight of the
world
.
Furthermore
, the Olympics promote peace around the
world
. During the bidding for the event, various governments seek for support from participating countries in order to win the bid.
Hence
good diplomatic relationship
Suggestion
the good diplomatic relationship
is needed. More so, nations leave behind their political differences during the events while campaigns against discrimination
such
as those against racism are promoted.
As a result
, the Olympics
has enable
Suggestion
have enabled
people to interact with each other's despite differing political ideologies. In conclusion, the Olympics is still important today as it ensure worldwide people and aid
tourism
. Increased public awareness about it should be encouraged.
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