Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Nowadays, Various issues are bothering across the globe, out of which environmental, population and their basic necessity is
major concern
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a major concern
the major concern
. Even my country
have
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has
the same, which will be discussed in
later part
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a later part
later parts
the later part
, along with
solution
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a solution
the solution
solutions
. Considering the Problems, one by one.
First
, Atmosphere plays an important role to preserve life on earth.
This
is caused due to heavy pollution by the industries and vehicle's.
For example
,
One
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the One
who
are
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is
at
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in
cities,
are
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is
less healthy than the person who stay in
village
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the village
villages
.
Second
, Human count and their education problems, goes hand
to
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in
hand. If the former increases than the minimal provisions for them will become harder.
For example
, let's take 2 families with
same income
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the same income
and different size, we can observe the smallest will have better lives than
the largest
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the larger
one.
Comming
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Coming
to the solution for the above, in
this
paragraph.
First
, we should go green by more plantation and reducing the usage of items that creates the cause.
For example
, we should plant on
tree
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the tree
a tree
infront
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in front
of our house and create a garden for every
residencial
used or designed for residence or limited to residences
residential
colony.
Second
, we should restrict the count of children,
atmost
couple or less.
This
in turn solves the
third
. For
an
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a
sample, The Government, should provide tax exemption for the small family. In conclusion, It's not
only responsibility
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the only responsibility
of the
individual but
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individual, but
the representative's should bring the necessary law, so that
problem
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problems
the problem
can be solved with sooner effect.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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