Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Nowadays, Across the Globe, environment, population and schooling became
an
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a
major
issues
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issue
. Even, at my back home, we are facing the same along with poverty.
Let's
make it possible through a specific action or lack of action for something to happen
Lets
discuss in detail about them in the latter part. Coming to my Country issues, growth of head count stands in the
first
place. Due to increase of
this
, my country is facing lots many of
problem's
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the problem's
related to
environment
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the environment
, employment and basic necessities provision to them. My Government, is unable to provide job opportunities to all the educated.
This
in turn not only lead them to poverty
zone but
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zone, but
also
poor schooling for their
next
generation's.
For example
, if a family has four members, out of which one was earning,
then
it won't be sufficient to
fullfil
put in effect
fulfil
their basic needs. So, they can't effort
for
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to
better education for their children. They tend to move to outside of the city to decrease their expenditure.
This
situation contributes to deforestation, creating and
hazzard
a source of danger; a possibility of incurring loss or misfortune
hazard
hazards
to
environment
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the environment
. In order to overcome the above problems, The Government should take
following actions
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the following actions
.
First
, It should create awareness in the public related to large families and their consequences.
For example
, creating a
programe
a series of steps to be carried out or goals to be accomplished
program
programme
, showing the pros of
small family
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a small family
and cons of large. Apart from the mentioned, it should encourage,
employement
the state of being employed or having a job
employment
sources, so that people can
with stand
resist or confront with resistance
withstand
by their own.
For example
,
family
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a family
with two salaried will have
better life
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a better life
than the with single income. In conclusion, it
also
responsibility
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the responsibility
of each and everyone residing in that area, to contribute to the growth of their Nation.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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