Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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I am in consummate accord with the statement that, the earth’s natural green reserves purify its atmosphere and function synonymously as that of the mammalian lungs. I
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advocate the view that,
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destruction
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will ruin our present world.
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, from our basic knowledge of plant physiology, it can be restated that, plants by the process of photosynthesis convert the harmful carbon-dioxide gas into oxygen, without which life cannot exist.
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a wider perspective, it can be stated that, the earth’s forests purify the atmosphere and thereby help in sustaining life.
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, environmentalists have proven that, the rapid
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of forests is
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a leading cause of global warming.
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the destruction
of the natural green reserves may lead to
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a surge in the global temperature that agricultural land may become arid, leading to
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famine and deaths.
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, forests
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house diverse forms of life and these would become extinct if we continue to destroy their natural habitats.
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, scientific research has proven that
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ecosystem act as natural scavengers and by the process of
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changing to a lower state (a less respected state)
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ecology helps in producing crude oil, which fuels our modern world and its unavailability is unimaginable as
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will directly catalyse a global economic crisis.
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a source
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of numerous medicinal plants, from which varieties of modern medicines are produced; Quinine, an antimalarial drug, produced from the barks of Cinchona trees is the best possible example.
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the forest destruction
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will
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be a bane for the medical community.
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the harmony of the present world will be ruined if our natural green reserves are continuously destroyed and there is a theoretical possibility that the blue planet might become lifeless if these green lungs are totally wiped out.
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