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In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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People from different parts of the world believe that youths who just graduated from high school should take a break and travel
awag
from a particular thing or place or position
away
a wag
 from their parents as a new starting in order to learn how to depend on themselves. Actually, travelling abroad at
this
 part of
teenager's
Suggestion
a teenager's life
life
 is not a bad idea, but that does not mean there are no disadvantages. Starting with the positive side of travelling, teenagers who graduated are going through very harsh time in which they will have to take an important
desicion
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
 for their future. So they need to get rid
from
Suggestion
of
 the pressure on them, in order to relax and calm down, at least for a week so they can think wisely and decide. As well as, to know how
life
 is away from their parents and family.
Comparsely
, even though travelling abroad will be a good idea for newly graduated students, it has a bad
affects
Suggestion
effect
effects
 for sure.
For example
, teenagers who depend mostly on their parents cannot change in a short period of time so he/she will get lost more and more if they travelled away from their family, which will end up with taking the wrong decision. Plus, some will prefer not to complete their education, they will think that
life
 is much easier when they will work and depend on themselves without the need of education, especially if their trip took more than 2 months they will start getting away from the academic environment. For me as a student who just graduated, I am with the idea of taking a small break in a calm place away from the crowd and people's opinions about what to study, but that does not mean that studying is not a must, especially with the world's development, academic qualifications are the main factor to live a happy
life
 and have a good job.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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