Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion?

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Crime has been a continuous problem for our society. Some believe that capital punishment is essential to control

violence

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in society.

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essay will discuss why capital punishment is unnecessary and there are other ways of controlling

violence

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. At times,

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death penality

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the death penalty

death penalty

is the only way to create fear in

population

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the population

a population

. Many people are not scared of imprisonment as they can get out of there easily by either breaking out

from

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the jail or by bribing the officials. In those cases only

death

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can create a feeling of fear.

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, India has recently introduced

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death penalty

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the death penalty

for rapists.

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was not the case earlier so criminals were not scared of taking away a woman's integrity, but now

atleast

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at least

they will think before doing any

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act. In many cases when

violence

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cannot be controlled by other disciplinary actions, taking their

life

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becomes the only solution. Even though capital punishment is important to maintain

violence

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in some, but taking a person's

life

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doesn't seem humane. There are other

penalities

the act of punishing

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life sentence

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a life sentence

prison which

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prison, which

can help in restricting the law breakers.

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sometimes could be more dangerous that killing someone

other than what is under consideration or implied

else

here the sinner has to live in a cell his entire

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, thinking about the mistake he made.

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death

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seems to be a very easy option for a terrorist who has taken several lives,

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he could be kept alive and tortured for the sin he had made. In order to continue decorum in society strong

penalities

the act of punishing

penalties

are important not only

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. In conclusion, rather than executing the offenders, other ways like

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imprisonment could be used because execution is an easy way out of their crime.

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essay explained why killing for justice is not essential for controlling

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree to this opinion?

Your opinion

Nowadays, many people find it difficult to balance their work and personal lives. What are the reasons for this? What can employers do to help employees achieve a better work-life balance?

Maths plays a vital role in a business' success. Agree/disagree?

Today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

you have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that we booked by the organiser of a company. write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include, details about the meeting, the problem you face and what should be done.