Some people believe that free housing should be provided by the government for under-privileged and people who can’t afford to buy a house. To what extent do you agree and disagree with the statement? Give examples based on your own experience.

Nowadays, a lot of debate is going on regarding the
government
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's
responsiblity
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responsibility
towards
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underprivileged
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people
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. Some argue that they should provide free housing for those who cannot afford to buy a
house
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and I completely agree with
this
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. On the one hand, some
people
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believe that it is the
resposibility
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responsibility
of every individual to take care of themselves including having their own home. They say the
government
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should treat everyone
equal
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and
hence
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should not provide any special benefits for housing because someone is poor and is not capable.
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, since the money comes from the taxes that are paid by the citizens and belongs to all the
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, it ought to be used for public benefits.
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, high priorities should be given to issues like national security and building roads and railways that are beneficial for the whole society.
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, they see owning a
house
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as a choice rather than a necessity.
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, another group of
people
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are of the opinion that every
government
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has the responsibility to provide shelter for those who are financially weak and incapable.
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, most of the nations are
under-developled
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under-developed
or developing and
majority
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the majority
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of
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are working hard even to earn
meal
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for one time.
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, they are uneducated and do not have a
well paying
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job.
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, owning a
house
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becomes a distant dream.
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, the authorities should take care of every individual and it is their duty to protect the poor. By
poviding
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providing
shelter, they are making their families safe from natural disasters and criminals, thereby making their life better.
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, since
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apply
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society is biased and there is no way for
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the
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poor to become rich
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unless governments provide basic facilities like
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for helping
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them, they can never achieve anything in life.
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,
protection
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the protection
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of a
house
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is something that every individual deserves and sometimes
people
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are not able to afford it. In my opinion,
although
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government
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funds
has
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their own priorities and
need
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needs
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, they should be
responsibile
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responsible
for uplifting
lower class
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lower-class
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people
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and free housing is the least they can do for the same.

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