Introduction
In many countries, as life expectancy is increasing steadily, elderly people are outnumbering those in their young ages.While there are some benefits to be considered, I hold the opinion that its drawbacks are much more significant.
Body paragraph 1
On the one hand, the senior exert a great influence
on
shaping the younger generation's morality. Compared to young people, those who reached their twilight years typically gained considerable specialised knowledge and hand-on experience accumulated through years of working, all of which make a significant contribution to certain key fields. Suggestion
in
This
is particularly the case in Linking Words
medical care sector
where professional doctors are mostly at the middle-aged. Suggestion
the medical care sector
Besides
that, the senior citizens play an Linking Words
irreplacable
role to preserve cultural identity, which is fading in the era impossible to replace
irreplaceable
off
globalization. With the connects a noun with the preceding word
of
familarity
with traditional culture, they, personal knowledge or information about someone or something
familiarity
hence
, uphold moral values to pass down. Folk tales, Linking Words
for example
, are interpreted by grandparents.Linking Words
Body paragraph 2
On the other hand
, Linking Words
however
, we should not underestimate negative consequences that an Linking Words
age
population causes. Suggestion
aging
ageing
aged
Firstly
, there is likely to have an imbalance in the workforce due to the lack of young Linking Words
labor
and a social class comprising those who do manual labor or work for wages
labour
this
will greatly affect the economic and social well-being of countries in the long run. Linking Words
As a result
, the government has to take less-than-desirable measures Linking Words
such
as depending on immigration or encouraging people to have more children in the hope of filling Linking Words
this
gap. Linking Words
Secondly
, it is a society with an aging population that will put huge pressure on government budgets. Indeed, an increasing number of Linking Words
old
people Suggestion
older
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also means
greater amounts of pension, medical care cost needed and there would be fewer funds spent on other pressing issues Suggestion
also mean
such
as education or housing shortages.Linking Words
Conclusion
In conclusion,
although
I acknowledge that we can reap some benefitsLinking Words
fro
m an aging society, I would contend that Suggestion
of
this
tendency would have many detrimental effects and the government should take feasible actions to tackle Linking Words
this
demographic problemLinking Words