Some people think that public libraries are no longer important, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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The number of public libraries is decreasing nowadays. The government states that a huge amount of money is required to maintain public libraries and their facilities while there are only a few people who take advantage of these facilities. City dwellers

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think that the existence of those libraries is no longer necessary. In

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essay, I shall give two

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of views regarding the importance of public libraries and my personal opinion about it. On the one hand, some people feel uncomfortable to read at public libraries.

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, it is because most of those places are boring.

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, people have to be quiet in the room and they are not allowed to bring food and beverages. In fact, some people feel they can concentrate more if they hear light music and drink a cup of coffee while reading their books.

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is why modern cafes are preferable for city dwellers.

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, the book collections in public libraries are usually not up to date while people can get new books easily from local

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bookstores

or from internet sources.

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, people can purchase new books from

amazon

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Amazon

, either the electronic or the printed versions.

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, not all people can afford to purchase books, access the internet, and go to the modern cafes.

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, there are some remote areas in

Indonesia where

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Indonesia, where

it is hard to get internet access there. Villagers in those areas have low income and low standard of living. Schools are located

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far away

from their living places.

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, I believe it is suitable to build public libraries in

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kind of places. So

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much

underage children have to work outdoors to support their family,

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, introducing reading as a hobby to them can be beneficial so that they can escape and get lost from their tiring daily routine. Villagers can just chill and relax to read some books at public libraries. In conclusion, the importance of public libraries depends on where they are located. I personally believe that city dwellers no longer need them while villagers find them useful.

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