Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had huge impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree?

Social networking sites are having
a huge impact
on our community.
essay will discuss about how social media
is negatively impacting
are negatively impacting
our society. Before social media came into people's life, everyone used to meet their family members,
friends in
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friends, in
-person and celebrated every occasion with them.
Nowadays with
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Nowadays, with
the invention of social media nobody wants to
socialize but
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socialize, but
wants to connect with community on social media.
For instance
, people prefer talking to others on chat or
of phone calls. According to
recent survey
a recent survey
recent surveys
its observed that people spending time on social media is rapidly increasing.
a favorite saying of a sect or political group
of social media is to connect people virtually, overuse of it is isolating people physically. Social networking sites like twitter has given everyone right to share their opinions independently with people
anytime anywhere
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anytime, anywhere
but these opinions are causing lots of chaos since not everyone's opinion is creating positive vibe.
instance if
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instance, if
some politician is expressing something on twitter about some policy,
it is
provoking lots of reactions from other countries and citizens sometimes resulting
or misuse of words by celebrity in their message on social media is giving
wrong impression
the wrong impression
the world
. Not only it is causing negative
impact but
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impact, but
producing health problems and other issues.
Total amount
The total amount
of time person
of time a person
spending on social media is increasing day by
day which
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day, which
is resulting in issues like insomnia, road accidents due to loss of attention, loss of concentration in young children, relations are getting destroyed. Looks like after some time we might need social media addiction reliving hospitals like drug addiction. To conclude, looks like social media is having
a negative impact
than positive even though it was developed to help people. Overuse of anything is bad and
is applicable in case of social media use
. People should try to restrain them from social media as much as possible if they want to live happy and satisfying life. If
continues and people don't realize the
of social
media overuse
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media, overuse
that future is not that far away when nobody in the world will have any real social life.
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