Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had huge impact on both individuals and society. To what extend do you agree?
Social networking sites are having
huge
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a huge impact
impact
on our community. This
essay will discuss about how social media is negatively impacting
our society.
Before social media came into people's life, everyone used to meet their family members, Suggestion
are negatively impacting
friends in
-person and celebrated every occasion with them. Accept comma addition
friends, in
Nowadays with
the invention of social media nobody wants to Accept comma addition
Nowadays, with
socialize but
wants to connect with community on social media. Accept comma addition
socialize, but
For instance
, people prefer talking to others on chat or facebook
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Facebook
instead
of phone calls. According to recent survey
its observed that people spending time on social media is rapidly increasing. Suggestion
a recent survey
recent surveys
Although
main moto
of social media is to connect people virtually, overuse of it is isolating people physically.
Social networking sites like twitter has given everyone right to share their opinions independently with people a favorite saying of a sect or political group
motto
anytime anywhere
but these opinions are causing lots of chaos since not everyone's opinion is creating positive vibe. Accept comma addition
anytime, anywhere
For
instance if
some politician is expressing something on twitter about some policy, Accept comma addition
instance, if
its
provoking lots of reactions from other countries and citizens sometimes resulting it is
it's
into
riots. Suggestion
in
Miscommunication
or misuse of words by celebrity in their message on social media is giving wrong impression
to Suggestion
the wrong impression
world
.
Not only it is causing negative Suggestion
the world
impact but
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impact, but
also
producing health problems and other issues. Total amount
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The total amount
of time person
spending on social media is increasing day by Suggestion
of time a person
day which
is resulting in issues like insomnia, road accidents due to loss of attention, loss of concentration in young children, relations are getting destroyed. Looks like after some time we might need social media addiction reliving hospitals like drug addiction.
To conclude, looks like social media is having Accept comma addition
day, which
negative
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a negative impact
impact
than positive even though it was developed to help people. Overuse of anything is bad and this
is applicable in case of social media use also
. People should try to restrain them from social media as much as possible if they want to live happy and satisfying life. If this
continues and people don't realize the impact
of social media overuse
, Accept comma addition
media, overuse
then
that future is not that far away when nobody in the world will have any real social life.
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