Many jobs used to be done at home by hand, but nowadays an increasing number of them are done using machines instead. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this development.
A lot of tasks at the
house
were accomplished by hands, Majority of them have now been taken over by machinery. In my view, mankind has benefited more from this
advancement. My upcoming essay will elaborate more on this
.
Firstly
, Humans have evolved
rapidly in the past 30 years, to be more dependent on electronic devices. Suggestion
has evolved
For instance
, a lot of our everyday house
chores have now been replaced by appliances, such
as vacuum cleaners, Blenders and dishwashers etc. As a result
, we have saved our self’s time and effort’s. For example
, It took us an hour to cut the grass of our backyard and now we can get it done in minutes with the help of grass cutter.
Secondly
, we have become very much dependent on these machines to do all our work at home. As a result
,
we have become victim's to Accept space
,
lazieness
.inactivity resulting from a dislike of work
laziness
This
has caused chronic disease. Such
as, Diabetes, Hypertension etc. Additionally
, we spend more money in
buying these home appliances and their maintenance. One clear example is electrical stoveSuggestion
on
,
It costs more to buy as compared to cooking on wood.
To conclude, I strongly believe that mechanical devices have taken over Accept space
,
alot
of our daily Suggestion
a lot
house work
and that has helped us in saving our precious time.the work of cleaning and running a house
housework
Moreover
,
It has Accept space
,
also
made our life simpler and more reliable.In Addition
,
Accept space
,
this
has brought comfort to our house
by eliminating the hard work and attention that was once a required to complete the job by hand.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...