Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#people #paparazzi #celebrities #privacy #pictures #price #fame

Now a

days

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day

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Taking selfies are trending in every part of the world

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some

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Some

individual believe that taking pictures shouldn't be allowed

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in other

words it

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words, it

completly

to a complete degree or to the full or entire extent

completely

controlling

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controlled

there

of them or themselves

their

private

life

On the other hand

other feel that

this

is just to become famous

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In my essay both sides are discussed appropriately.

First

of all

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celebrities are

also

known to be a normal

people

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person

.They have

same

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the same lifestyle

same lifestyle

life

style that others do

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Because of paparazzi they can't even walk on the road

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due to

this

not only affecting

there

of them or themselves

their

life

other family member in

there

of them or themselves

their

life

also

getting indulged in it

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last

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Last

year when Actor Tom Cruise was

divorsed

of someone whose marriage has been legally dissolved

divorced

there were

lot

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lots

of photos published of the actor as well as his ex- wife at that time his daughter was

worsly

in a wise manner

wisely

variously

included in that

controversies

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controversy

that

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That

is why

this

paparazzi should be

abondoned

forsaken by owner or inhabitants

abandoned

abundant

. On the other side

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Some famous people allow

paparazi

writing that provides information (especially information of an official nature)

papers

paparazzi

to others because

this

make

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makes

them

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more famous

fame

than others

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MTV magazine

kim

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Kim

kardeshian allowed them to post more than 20 half-nude pics so that she

get

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gets

fame

than her sisters

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furthermore

in addition

Furthermore

Merlin

monrow

5th President of the United States; author of the Monroe Doctrine (1758-1831)

Monroe

was publicized due to her pose on some newspapers.Even now a days there are lot applications which make them

fame

by sitting at home.

the

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The

only thing they have to do take a self picture and edit it like a

proffessional

engaged in a profession or engaging in as a profession or means of livelihood

professional

way. In conclusion There are

lot

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a lot

lots

of people who live

there

of them or themselves

their

life

like a normal person and will be down to earth with no pictures because they believe it is being covered other individuals in the family.

but

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But

others like

kim

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Kim

kardesian

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merlin

monroe who

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Monroe, who

Monroe who

actually wanted to showcase

there

of them or themselves

their

lifestyle to

public

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the public

so they get more

fame

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invasion of privacy
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mental health
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