Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,
environment
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environmental
protection has become major concerned in public. There are some people think that individual people can do nothing to protect the
environment its
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environment, its
only
government
and big
companies
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company's
companies'
company
responsibilities to protect the
environment
and make a difference. I think that every individual
do
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does
a lot of things to protect the
environment
.
To begin
, with
individual
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an individual
the individual
are
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is
able to do to protect the
environment
because every person make contribute to protect the
environment
.
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.
for
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For
example, if everyone save one paper in a day,
then
billions of
tree
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trees
are saved so it makes a
hug
unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope
huge
difference in
country
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the country
a country
to protect
environment
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the environment
.
Moreover
, its
responsibility
of
government
and large companies to do a lot of
thing
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things
to protect the
environment
like
government
and big companies aware public to planting a tree in their home and office and
also
do lots of
thing
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things
to clean our society. Well
government
also
bans some plastic bags and disposal plates to protect the
environment
.
However
, big companies
also
take
responsibility
to run an environmentalist NGO who
do
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does
a
lots
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lot
of things like planting a tree in many
society
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societies
and cleaning public areas like railway station, shopping malls and
also
aware people
.
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.
To conclude, it is not only
responsibility
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responsible
for
government
or big companies to protect the
environment but
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environment, but
also
everyone
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everyone's
responsibility
to do lots of things to protect
environment
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the environment
and make our country
environment
friendly.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental awareness
  • sustainable practices
  • renewable energy
  • carbon footprint
  • waste reduction
  • conservation
  • ecosystem
  • pollution
  • climate change
  • responsibility
  • leadership
  • legislation
  • investment
  • collaboration
  • systemic change
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