Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays,

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environment

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environmental

protection has become major concerned in public. There are some people think that individual people can do nothing to protect the

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environment its

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environment, its

only

government

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and big

companies

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company's

companies'

company

responsibilities to protect the

environment

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and make a difference. I think that every individual

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does

a lot of things to protect the

environment

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an individual

the individual

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able to do to protect the

environment

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because every person make contribute to protect the

environment

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example, if everyone save one paper in a day,

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billions of

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trees

are saved so it makes a

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unusually great in size or amount or degree or especially extent or scope

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difference in

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the country

a country

to protect

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environment

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the environment

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, its

responsibility

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government

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and large companies to do a lot of

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things

to protect the

environment

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government

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and big companies aware public to planting a tree in their home and office and

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do lots of

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things

to clean our society. Well

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also

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bans some plastic bags and disposal plates to protect the

environment

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, big companies

also

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take

responsibility

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to run an environmentalist NGO who

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does

lots

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lot

of things like planting a tree in many

society

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societies

and cleaning public areas like railway station, shopping malls and

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aware people

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To conclude, it is not only

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responsibility

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responsible

for

government

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or big companies to protect the

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environment but

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everyone

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everyone's

responsibility

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to do lots of things to protect

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the environment

and make our country

environment

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friendly.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.5

Complete response

4.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

231 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

environmental awareness
sustainable practices
renewable energy
carbon footprint
waste reduction
conservation
ecosystem
pollution
climate change
responsibility
leadership
legislation
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collaboration
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Students should pay the full cost for their own study, because university education benefits individuals rather than society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say that death penalty is the only way to decrease the rate of crime. while others believe that there are other better ways. Discuss both ideas and give your own opinion.

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