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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The use of nuclear
technology
 has been
debating
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debated
debate
 over the years due to the effect of its applications. Many people believe that nuclear power is bad for human
health but
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health, but
 some people believe that it provides cheap and clean energy and the benefit of nuclear
technology
 provides better advantages than disadvantages. I agree that nuclear
technology
 provides more
advantage
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advantages
 than disadvantages and I will explain my reasons. The introduction
on
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of
to
 nuclear
technology
 in the medical field and
drastically improve
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drastically improves
human’s
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human
 health. The application of
X-Ray
 in the medical field has
enable
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enabled
 the doctors to diagnose their
patient
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patients
 and provide accurate treatment. The basic usage of
X-Ray
 on human chest allows the doctor to check on
patient
lung’s
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lung
 condition or if there’s any infection. On a
more advance
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more advanced
technology
, usage of
X-Ray
 on human brain allow doctors to check if there’s any blood clog in the brain which may impact the
patient
 intelligence.
Patient
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A patient
 who suffers from
accident
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an accident
the accident
 will need to go though
X-Ray
 to check for any internal organ damage and bone fracture. From the
X-Ray
 image, doctors and provide better treatment for the
patient
.
X-Ray
electromagnetic radiation of short wavelength produced when high-speed electrons strike a solid target
X-ray
 has
also
 been widely used in the
food
 industry.
X-Ray
electromagnetic radiation of short wavelength produced when high-speed electrons strike a solid target
X-ray
 has been used in the
food
 industry to detect foreign material inside the packed
food
 or beverage. Before the introduction of
X-Ray
, most
food
 and beverage manufacturers only use metal detector which only limits to the detection of ferrous, non-ferrous and stainless steel.
However
, with the introduction of
X-Ray
, non-metallic foreign materials can be detected
such
 as glass, ceramic and stone. All these foreign materials can be a potential hazard or
chocking
a condition caused by blocking the airways to the lungs (as with food or swelling of the larynx)
choking
 hazard if
accidently
without advance planning
accidentally
 consumed by people.
Company
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The company
 may suffer huge losses due to customer complaint or any product recalls. In conclusion, the benefit of nuclear
technology
 has far outright the disadvantages. The usage of nuclear
technology
 in the medical industry has proven to improve
human’s
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human
 health and reduce complaint and
food
 recalls due to foreign material found.
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