The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The use of nuclear
technology
has been
debating
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debated
debate
over the years due to the effect of its applications. Many people believe that nuclear power is bad for human
health but
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health, but
some people believe that it provides cheap and clean energy and the benefit of nuclear
technology
provides better advantages than disadvantages. I agree that nuclear
technology
provides more
advantage
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advantages
than disadvantages and I will explain my reasons. The introduction
on
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of
to
nuclear
technology
in the medical field and
drastically improve
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drastically improves
human’s
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human
health. The application of
X-Ray
in the medical field has
enable
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enabled
the doctors to diagnose their
patient
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patients
and provide accurate treatment. The basic usage of
X-Ray
on human chest allows the doctor to check on
patient
lung’s
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lung
condition or if there’s any infection. On a
more advance
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more advanced
technology
, usage of
X-Ray
on human brain allow doctors to check if there’s any blood clog in the brain which may impact the
patient
intelligence.
Patient
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A patient
who suffers from
accident
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an accident
the accident
will need to go though
X-Ray
to check for any internal organ damage and bone fracture. From the
X-Ray
image, doctors and provide better treatment for the
patient
.
X-Ray
electromagnetic radiation of short wavelength produced when high-speed electrons strike a solid target
X-ray
has
also
been widely used in the
food
industry.
X-Ray
electromagnetic radiation of short wavelength produced when high-speed electrons strike a solid target
X-ray
has been used in the
food
industry to detect foreign material inside the packed
food
or beverage. Before the introduction of
X-Ray
, most
food
and beverage manufacturers only use metal detector which only limits to the detection of ferrous, non-ferrous and stainless steel.
However
, with the introduction of
X-Ray
, non-metallic foreign materials can be detected
such
as glass, ceramic and stone. All these foreign materials can be a potential hazard or
chocking
a condition caused by blocking the airways to the lungs (as with food or swelling of the larynx)
choking
hazard if
accidently
without advance planning
accidentally
consumed by people.
Company
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The company
may suffer huge losses due to customer complaint or any product recalls. In conclusion, the benefit of nuclear
technology
has far outright the disadvantages. The usage of nuclear
technology
in the medical industry has proven to improve
human’s
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human
health and reduce complaint and
food
recalls due to foreign material found.
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