Some people are leaving the countryside to live in cities and towns, leaving only old people in the countryside. what problems are caused by this issue ? what can be done to solve the situation ?
Massive migration of young people into metropolitan cities in an attempt to find a better life is a major concern in many countries. As more and more young people are leaving the countryside, average age in many rural villages
have raised
considerably. Suggestion
has raised
This
demographic change may have serous
consequences and should be concerned with work or important matters rather than play or trivialities
serious
adressed
urgently.
The results of (of mail) marked with a destination
addressed
negetive
migration of young men and women from characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
periphral
areas have drastic effects on the economical situation. Since the vast majority of these areas rely on blue on or near an edge or constituting an outer boundary; the outer area
peripheral
color
workers performing manual labour, many factories and farm owners a band that fits around the neck and is usually folded over
collar
can not
find enough working hands to perform the required job. As a can not
cannot
consequences many
Suggestion
consequence, many
consequence many
buisnesses
are a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it
businesses
business
business'
loosing
money and are forced to shut down. Another main problem lies in the fact the increased average age lead to higher needs for medical and social support which, in turn, fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense
losing
further
increase the finicial
burden on the city involving financial matters
financial
expensses
.
Despite the above mentioned, the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experiences
the
are several changes which could be made in order to reverse these trends. people in general
they
Initially increasing
work places options, especially for people with academic education Accept comma addition
Initially, increasing
such
as university personal or engeneers
, may shift the tide and cause people to stay. a person who uses scientific knowledge to solve practical problems
engineers
Also
improving the local education system may convince many children bearing families to remain in te
countryside. definite article
the
Finally
, tax reduction and social benefits may also
assist these peripheal
areas and convince people to remain.
In conclusion, on or near an edge or constituting an outer boundary; the outer area
peripheral
negetive
migration from the countryside to major cities is an international concern and have severe social and economical effects. characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features
negative
Despte
that, there are ways where we can change the tide Suggestion
Despite
soo
people will stay and enjoy its to a very great extent or degree
so
soon
beuty
.
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