More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people say that the price of fast foods will solve this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Obesity is spreading amongst many individuals. It is commonly believed by a few people, that the cost of junk foods may resolve
this
issue. I admit, increasing the prices of
such
foods will not make them shift to
healthier diet
Suggestion
a healthier diet
healthier diets
. My essay will elaborate more on the benefits and drawbacks of
this
.
Firstly
, Humans
are gaining
Suggestion
is gaining
extra body mass at a
fast
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faster
pace.
In particular
, from all the fast foods that they consume regularly. For
this
reason, changing the prices of these consumable items will definitely make an impact.
For instance
, just
last
year food and drug authority in the United States of America increased the price of burger patties.
As a result
, there was a reduction in the intake of burgers. As people tend to avoid buying expensive meals.
On the other hand
, changing the cost of fast foods will not completely eliminate
this
crucial problem of overweight people. Unless people get educated on the consequences of obesity and the health benefits of dieting. Higher costs will deprive healthy folks of the luxury of buying junk foods.
Moreover
, exercising should be supplemented with
this
.
For example
,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
burned more fat and lost weight by simply controlling the things
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
eat every day and with daily walking at the park.
This
was more beneficial for me. In conclusion, weight gain can only be controlled by a combination of things, which includes diet and jogging. Making food
pricy
Suggestion
prices
will not resolve the problem of obesity.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • fattening foods
  • calorie-dense
  • healthier food choices
  • taxation
  • economic implications
  • social implications
  • subsidies
  • nutritional education
  • public health campaigns
  • nanny state
  • individual's right
  • consumer behavior
  • preventative measures
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