The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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graph illustrates the
percentage
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of the UK population tuning into any
radio
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or television programme throughout the
day
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in 1992.
Firstly
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, it is seen that the
percentage
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of
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television watchers peaks at around 8:00PM with the
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being around 50% of the population, it can
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be seen that the
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maintains a semi-stable increase across the period from 6:00AM and until around 8:00PM,
while
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having a decay during the remaining period of the
day
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.
Secondly
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, the
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of the UK population listening to the
radio
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peaks around 9:00AM,
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having a gradual decrease throughout the period starting from around 9:00AM and ending at 2PM, and a boost across the remainder of the
day
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.
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, in the first half of the
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the
percentage
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of television watchers is generally higher than the
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of
radio
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listeners,
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on the flip side the
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of
radio
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listeners across the
second
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half is generally higher.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, radio, day with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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