The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
graph illustrates the Linking Words
percentage
of the UK population tuning into any Use synonyms
radio
or television programme throughout the Use synonyms
day
in
1992.
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Firstly
, it is seen that the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
the
television watchers peaks at around 8:00PM with the Correct article usage
apply
percentage
being around 50% of the population, it can Use synonyms
also
be seen that the Linking Words
percentage
maintains a semi-stable increase across the period from 6:00AM and until around 8:00PM, Use synonyms
while
having a decay during the remaining period of the Linking Words
day
.
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Secondly
, the Linking Words
percentage
of the UK population listening to the Use synonyms
radio
peaks around 9:00AM, Use synonyms
while
having a gradual decrease throughout the period starting from around 9:00AM and ending at 2PM, and a boost across the remainder of the Linking Words
day
.
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Lastly
, in the first half of the Linking Words
day
the Use synonyms
percentage
of television watchers is generally higher than the Use synonyms
percentage
of Use synonyms
radio
listeners, Use synonyms
while
on the flip side the Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
radio
listeners across the Use synonyms
second
half is generally higher.Linking Words
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