Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?
Human, Not only made an adverse impact on the
eco
balance, but Suggestion
Eco
also
leads to existance
of many species. We will discuss them in the later part.
Coming to the cause, Suggestion
the existence
existence
lot
of factors are involved and few of them are discussed here. Suggestion
a lot
Firstly
, because of growth of population, result in deforestation and contributed to the problem. For example
, Most of the forest area is converted into residential area, which result in less rain fall
and water falling in drops from vapor condensed in the atmosphere
rainfall
rise
in the temperature. Suggestion
a rise
Secondly
, Seafood, created an issue for sea animals. For a sample, Extensive fishing made extinction of some of the rare creature's that are living in underwater. Lastly
, Industrial development, has the major contribution. As a result
of this
, Air, Water got polluted, due to release of wastage from the industries. For example
, Gases that are released from them, are harmful to human as well as birds.
Suggestion
of solution's for the above are as follows. We should plant as many trees as possible. Go Green should be taken as high priority, which only can reduce the impact of the present Suggestion
The suggestion
danager
. the condition of being susceptible to harm or injury
danger
Aqua culture
, should be promoted and fisherman should be involved Suggestion
Aquaculture
into
it. Suggestion
in
For example
, If the government, provides subsidy to them for Auqa farms
Accept comma addition
farms, then
then
it will be helpful for their livelyhood
and can save the the financial means whereby one lives
livelihood
livelihoods
speices
too.
To conclude, Everyone should feel aromatic substances of vegetable origin used as a preservative
spices
species
speeches
resposibilty
and need to work for eliminating the cause. We need to strive for the better and the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
healthy Globe
for our future generation's.Suggestion
the healthier Globe
healthier Globe
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