Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

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Human, Not only made an adverse impact on the
eco
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Eco
balance, but
also
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leads to
existance
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the existence
existence
of many species. We will discuss them in the later part. Coming to the cause,
lot
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a lot
of factors are involved and few of them are discussed here.
Firstly
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, because of growth of population, result in deforestation and contributed to the problem.
For example
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, Most of the forest area is converted into residential area, which result in less
rain fall
water falling in drops from vapor condensed in the atmosphere
rainfall
and
rise
Suggestion
a rise
in the temperature.
Secondly
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, Seafood, created an issue for sea animals. For a sample, Extensive fishing made extinction of some of the rare creature's that are living in underwater.
Lastly
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, Industrial development, has the major contribution.
As a result
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of
this
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, Air, Water got polluted, due to release of wastage from the industries.
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, Gases that are released from them, are harmful to human as well as birds.
Suggestion
Suggestion
The suggestion
of solution's for the above are as follows. We should plant as many trees as possible. Go Green should be taken as high priority, which only can reduce the impact of the present
danager
the condition of being susceptible to harm or injury
danger
.
Aqua culture
Suggestion
Aquaculture
, should be promoted and fisherman should be involved
into
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in
it.
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, If the government, provides subsidy to them for Auqa
farms
Accept comma addition
farms, then
then
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it will be helpful for their
livelyhood
the financial means whereby one lives
livelihood
livelihoods
and can save the
speices
aromatic substances of vegetable origin used as a preservative
spices
species
speeches
too. To conclude, Everyone should feel
resposibilty
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
and need to work for eliminating the cause. We need to strive for the better and
healthy Globe
Suggestion
the healthier Globe
healthier Globe
for our future generation's.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • habitat destruction
  • deforestation
  • urbanization
  • overexploitation
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • invasive species
  • conservation
  • sustainable practices
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • ecosystems
  • species population
  • genetic diversity
  • environmental awareness
  • protected areas
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