You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.

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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing to you regarding the Legal conference organized by Law University
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August in Toronto. Let me introduce myself. I am Armine Shavoyan. I work as a lawyer in Armenia and I am an advocate of the Chamber of Advocates of the Republic of Armenia. I have informed about the meeting from the advertising on the Internet. I am really interested
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taking part in
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remarkable seminar, as I want to develop my professional skills
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because it influences positively
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my
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career.
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, I would like to inquire detailed information about above mentioned particularly the exact start and end dates , because I have many criminal cases, and I must to propriety they to the seminar dates .
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, more information about the conference themes what subjects are included there and
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daily schedule.
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, I need to know about the abode
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and type , whether the
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is involved the seminar
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or it is
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unpaid. What kind of type
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of accommodations
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you offer, it is the hotel single room or the hostel where I must
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stay with the roommate. I will be thankful that we provide me
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applying deadlines and
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. I look forward to your reply and would really appreciate your guidance regarding
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Sincerely Armine Shavoyan
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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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