You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country. Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing to you regarding the Legal conference organized by Law University daily schedule.
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August in Toronto.
Let me introduce myself. I am Armine Shavoyan. I work as a lawyer in Armenia and I am an advocate of the Chamber of Advocates of the Republic of Armenia.
I have informed about the meeting from the advertising on the Internet.
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I look forward to your reply and would really appreciate your guidance regarding Use synonyms
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Structure your letter
A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:
- A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
- The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
- A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)
When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.
All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.