In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can you deal with those causes?

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crime

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rate is going up in many countries.

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will discuss

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the main causes

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crime

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which includes unemployment and lack of physical activities or hobbies.

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solutions

a solution

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problems including

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problems, including

creating job opportunities and promoting healthy activities

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as sports, gardening etc. The rate of unemployment has increased tremendously in the

rescent

new

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past and people are not engaging them into any kind of healthy, physical

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or

adopt

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a hobby. The downfall in the global economy is resulting in the downsizing and even shutting down

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small businesses so, more and more people are getting

unemployed

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unemployed, therefore

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, they cannot afford to have a hobby or be part of any sports

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.

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, people working in a factory lost their jobs, as they were replaced by the robots and are unable to provide for their family,

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often results in people getting engaged in criminal

activity

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of some sort. Creating job opportunities and introducing community based affordable activities can help in keeping people away from crimes. People should be taught new technical skills free of cost, so, they can find jobs.

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, small businesses should be given reliefs like tax exemptions or subsidies fuel and

materials

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materials, hence

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, they can sustain the downfall of the economy and people should not

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fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

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jobs. People should be encouraged from the childhood to participate in physical activities and the facilities should be affordable if not free. If people are financially stable and have healthy

lifestyle there

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lifestyle, there

is less chance of getting them indulged in criminal activities which, eventually lowers the

crime

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rate. To conclude, there is a

raise

a growth in strength or number or importance

rise

in

crime

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around the globe.

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has discussed how unemployment and lack of physical activities can result in the involvement in criminal activities.

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suggested that, creating jobs and encouraging people to adopt some healthy, fun

activity

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will keep them away from unlawful doings.