Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education
for all students from preschool to graduation should be
government
sponsored and
thus
free for all, I completely disagree with
this
.
Education
is right
to
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for
every child and
thus
government
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the government
should provide that. Providing
sponsorhip
the act of sponsoring (either officially or financially)
sponsorship
to children whose parents cannot afford
education
is justifiable, but if
government
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the government
provides free
education even
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education, even
to those children whose parents are capable than
this
will only put
dent
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a dent
in
government
treasury. Free
education
to the children of financially
capabale
(usually followed by 'of') having capacity or ability
capable
parents will only result in wastage of
government
money and will only increase
national money deficit
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the national money deficit
national money deficits
. Our country is already under
burden
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the burden
of lots of debts taken from international organizations
such
as
IMF
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the IMF
, to provide free
education
to all, we will end up taking more loan from
such
organsations
the persons (or committees or departments etc.) who make up a body for the purpose of administering something
organisations
organizations
.
This
thus
hamper GDP of our country. In my view,
government
should provide free
education
to those children whose parents are incapable, like a major percentage of
population
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the population
in India is below
poverty line
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the poverty line
,
this
category of
population
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the population
canot
can not
cannot
provide proper food
to
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for
their children. Providing free
education
to the children of
such
citizens is totally
justifiable
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justified
and
also
in
addition
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addition, government
government
should provide free meals, uniform and study books to them. As an incentive, apart from the free
education
,
government
should provide rewards to
merit
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meritorious
students, be
them
people in general
they
from any category either financially sound or poor.
This
thus boost
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thus boosts
one's moral to study hard and achieve good grades. In conclusion, free
education
should be provided to those who are financially not
capable but
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capable, but
not to all,
this
thus
provides
education
to almost all the children and
also
keeps a check on
government
spending on
education
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • socio-economic background
  • equitable society
  • government-funded
  • higher quality standards
  • financial limitations
  • inefficiencies
  • wasteful spending
  • cost-effective
  • innovate
  • undervaluing
  • dropout rates
  • financial burden
  • well-being
  • higher education uptake
  • increased taxes
  • reallocation
  • vital sectors
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