Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

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Nowadays, Atomic is gaining popularity and became one of the

alternative

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alternatives

for the present source. There are both pros and con's regarding the same. Coming to Advantages of Atomic, In the present world, we find

lot

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lots

of scarcity of energy. In order to

fullfil

put in effect

fulfil

it,

this became as an

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as this became a

this became as a

primary alternative for the existing. The investment may be high, but

return

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the return

returns

wil

the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention

will

well

be in short span.

For example

, to provide electricity for

entire city

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the entire city

an entire city

, we require huge labour

Accept space

funds and time, but with

this

we require less labour, more funds and less time. Apart from

this

, it can be established far from the city in

waste

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the wasteland

wasteland

land

For instance

, useless

land

can be used for the development of

this

type of projects, which in turn produce power for large industries. The other side of the coin, it is more

danagerous

involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm

dangerous

. If something unusual happens,

then

there may huge loss of population, who

are staying

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is staying

near by

close at hand

nearby

cities.

Moreover

, the

land

can't be useful either for living or to cultivate.

For example

, Nuclear Explosion

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Niroshima

a port city on the southwestern coast of Honshu in Japan; on August 6, 1945 Hiroshima was almost completely destroyed by the first atomic bomb dropped on a populated area

Hiroshima

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during

second

world war, made the

land

useless and people physically challenged at the time of birth, even now, due to radiation.

Secondly

, Its mostly operated by computer's. Very few human resources are required and job

oppurtunities

a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances

opportunities

are less. To conclude, to my opinion, At the present situation, we need to encourage it and have to bring to

usage

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use

near by

close at hand

nearby

future.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
18Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

238 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Nuclear fission
Radioactive
Renewable energy
Decommissioning
Greenhouse gases
Emissions
Waste management
Energy security
Sustainable
Meltdown
Containment
Half-life
Nuclear proliferation
Clean energy
Risk assessment
Safety protocols
Energy crisis
Ecological footprint
Natural disaster
Energy transition

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