Atomic energy is becoming more and more popular energy source. However, some people argue that nuclear power puts life on the Earth to danger. What is your opinion?

Nowadays, Atomic is gaining popularity and became one of the
alternative
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alternatives
for the present source. There are both pros and con's regarding the same. Coming to Advantages of Atomic, In the present world, we find
lot
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lots
of scarcity of energy. In order to
fullfil
put in effect
fulfil
it,
this became as an
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as this became a
this became as a
primary alternative for the existing. The investment may be high, but
return
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the return
returns
wil
the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
will
well
be in short span.
For example
, to provide electricity for
entire city
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the entire city
an entire city
, we require huge labour
,
Accept space
,
funds and time, but with
this
we require less labour, more funds and less time. Apart from
this
, it can be established far from the city in
waste
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the wasteland
wasteland
land
.
For instance
, useless
land
can be used for the development of
this
type of projects, which in turn produce power for large industries. The other side of the coin, it is more
danagerous
involving or causing danger or risk; liable to hurt or harm
dangerous
. If something unusual happens,
then
there may huge loss of population, who
are staying
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is staying
in
near by
close at hand
nearby
cities.
Moreover
, the
land
can't be useful either for living or to cultivate.
For example
, Nuclear Explosion
on
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in
Niroshima
a port city on the southwestern coast of Honshu in Japan; on August 6, 1945 Hiroshima was almost completely destroyed by the first atomic bomb dropped on a populated area
Hiroshima
in
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during
second
world war, made the
land
useless and people physically challenged at the time of birth, even now, due to radiation.
Secondly
, Its mostly operated by computer's. Very few human resources are required and job
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
are less. To conclude, to my opinion, At the present situation, we need to encourage it and have to bring to
usage
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use
in
near by
close at hand
nearby
future.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Nuclear fission
  • Radioactive
  • Renewable energy
  • Decommissioning
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Emissions
  • Waste management
  • Energy security
  • Sustainable
  • Meltdown
  • Containment
  • Half-life
  • Nuclear proliferation
  • Clean energy
  • Risk assessment
  • Safety protocols
  • Energy crisis
  • Ecological footprint
  • Natural disaster
  • Energy transition
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