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Should we invent a new language for people from different countries to use for the international communication? Do you think there are more benefits or more problems with it? Explain.

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Some people suggest that a new
language
 should be invented in order to overcome the communication problems between different regions and cultures in the world. While
this
 idea may have some useful point of views, I believe it would raise a number of worrying issues. It is obvious that a new common
language
 would remove
language
 barriers, so that there will be more opportunities for each individual to study, work or travel all around the world.
As a result
, the standards of livings will be higher so that improve the country’s economic status.
In addition
, if people from different areas use the same
language
, it would be more easy and available to expand the amount of information and knowledge via books, magazines, news and so on.
On the other hand
, developing a new
language
 requires financial support of the government and a lot of time.
For instance
,
language
 experts need time and money to study and develop certain aspects of a new
language
,
such
 as grammar or vocabulary. Even if the
language
 is developed,
this
 innovation would increase expenditure on publishing and teaching,
expecially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
 in populous and developing countries as China or India.
Furthermore
, English is recognized as a global
language
that is
 popular and widely accepted all over the world.
Therefore
, to encourage using
such
 a popular
language
 that we have already had
is
Suggestion
are
 more effective and cost-efficient than innovating a new one. In conclusion, I strongly argue that it is unnecessary to create a new
language
 for international communication purpose because the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
Submitted by Thanh on

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • international communication
  • mutual understanding
  • language barriers
  • foster inclusivity
  • equal opportunities
  • global forums
  • simplify learning
  • resource-intensive
  • cultural erosion
  • linguistic diversity
  • emotional attachment
  • cultural attachment
  • achieving proficiency
  • access to education
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