Without capital punishment (death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of more violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society.

It is argued that,
death penalty
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the death penalty
is needed to eradicate crime from the society. As there is no safety for
public
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the public
and the number of brutal murders are
incrasing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
. In my opinion, I agree with the idea of harsh punishment of
death
because it creates a sense of
fear
in the mind of a criminal and at the same time state authorities should work on the permanent solution for these crimes. The only
fear
in anyone’s life is
death
, whether it is criminal or a common
people
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person
. By passing a strict law of
death penalty
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the death penalty
against violent doers, there will a
fear
of
death
for a criminal. If they attempt to do big crimes
such
as sexual violence, murder. There would be the only option left for
a
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an
accused is
death
.There are few countries enforced
this
death
penalty
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penalty, such
such
as
Soudi
of or relating to Saudi Arabia or its people
Saudi
Arabia passed a bill of capital punishment for sexual violence and murder in 1967, the law was very simple state
sherriff
the principal law-enforcement officer in a county
sheriff
sheriffs
would behead the
accussed
a defendant in a criminal proceeding
accused
person in front of judicial court after hearing. For the permanent solution, government official and well established doctor must work on the
phycology
the science of mental life
psychology
physiology
of
criminals
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criminal
criminal's
mind. We get to know, why these people go on
this
districutive
causing destruction or much damage
destructive
path. By doing
this
, we can have a solution in the early stage of that person and one can avoid doing
such
crimes. One of the best example of
this
situation is
scientist
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a scientist
and doctors in the state of Telanagan, India
are now working
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is now working
on
this
project called “Violent minds”. It is nothing but, reading minds of a criminal in every situation of his past and collecting the data of reaction, pleasure and
necesscity
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessity
of doing violence.
this
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This
surely solve
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surely solves
a big problem of
this
society. In conclusion, It is better to enforce
sentence
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the sentence
sentences
till
death
to create a
fear
in criminals and
also
official have to find a better way to stop crimes in the early stage of a
criminals
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criminal
.
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