Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

It is argued that, with the advancement of
technology we
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technology, we
have created our life more complicated
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
before. In my opinion, I agree with that statement because, there is a real threat to the contemporary jobs across the globe and currently people are getting
more lazy
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lazier
. One of the main reasons would be, with the introduction of Robotics with the help of artificial intelligence, in almost every field all manual tasks are getting automated. Almost 60 percent of current job roles which are
repetative
repetitive and persistent
repetitive
and manually done by employees will be vanished in
near future
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the near future
.
For
example American
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example, American
company called Tesla launched self driving cars which can drive with driver and An Indian startup company NoVoice made a software which
recognation voice
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recognition, voice
recognition voice
and at the same time it get printed which will
eventally
after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay
eventually
affects
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affect
medical transcription jobs. Another main reason is, with the help of “IOT”Internet of things. People are very much inactive as they have completely
forget
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forgotten
to do
even small routine
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an even small routine
even small routines
like switching on/off Air condition, switching on or off lights or Television because all
this
can be done with just by giving instructions or on a smartphone by sitting at one place.
For example
,
smarthomes
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smart homes
and Amazon’s Aisa (voice
recognization
the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged
recognition
tools)
etc
with the help of Internet. To conclude, It was so good to lead a life when the technology was very much basic. But it got progressed to
an
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such an extent
such
extent that few
repetative
repetitive and persistent
repetitive
job role worker are loosing jobs and people a getting more inactive.
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