Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

#life #technology

It is argued that, with the advancement of

technology we

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technology, we

have created our life more complicated

then

conjunction used in comparatives

than

before. In my opinion, I agree with that statement because, there is a real threat to the contemporary jobs across the globe and currently people are getting

more lazy

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lazier

. One of the main reasons would be, with the introduction of Robotics with the help of artificial intelligence, in almost every field all manual tasks are getting automated. Almost 60 percent of current job roles which are

repetative

repetitive and persistent

repetitive

and manually done by employees will be vanished in

near future

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the near future

For

example American

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example, American

company called Tesla launched self driving cars which can drive with driver and An Indian startup company NoVoice made a software which

recognation voice

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recognition, voice

recognition voice

and at the same time it get printed which will

eventally

after an unspecified period of time or an especially long delay

eventually

affects

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affect

medical transcription jobs. Another main reason is, with the help of “IOT”Internet of things. People are very much inactive as they have completely

forget

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forgotten

to do

even small routine

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an even small routine

even small routines

like switching on/off Air condition, switching on or off lights or Television because all

this

can be done with just by giving instructions or on a smartphone by sitting at one place.

For example

smarthomes

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smart homes

and Amazon’s Aisa (voice

recognization

the state or quality of being recognized or acknowledged

recognition

tools)

etc

with the help of Internet. To conclude, It was so good to lead a life when the technology was very much basic. But it got progressed to

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such an extent

such

extent that few

repetative

repetitive and persistent

repetitive

job role worker are loosing jobs and people a getting more inactive.

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