Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Nowadays, Almost all the countries are facing the
issue not
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issue, not
only related to
environment
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the environment
but
also
population and education. Even my country, have at present and are going to face the same, in
next ten years
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the next ten years
. Coming to the cause of
problem
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the problem
problems
a problem
, many reasons are contributing to it, out of which, we will discuss the important one's.
Firstly
, Eco system, became
an
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a
challenge because of industrial pollution.
For example
, Wastage from factories are the main reason for it, causing air and water polluted.
Secondly
,
Over head
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Overhead
count,
This
is due to lack of knowledge in public and
also
religious belief.
For instance
, some of the people, still believes that
abbortion
termination of pregnancy
abortion
is
sin
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a sin
and children are
gift
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gifts
from god.
Lastly
, Education, due to the above problem,
this
arises. To illustrate, The Government, can provide better school facilities only for few and will become difficult, due lack of funds, when the count increases. Regarding the solutions, are as follows.
Primilary
, The ruling party, should encourage go green program.
For example
, by planting more trees, developing
parks
United States civil rights leader who refused to give up her seat on a bus to a white man in Montgomery (Alabama) and so triggered the national Civil Rights movement (1913-2005)
Parks
.
Next
, It should create awareness in
general public
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the general public
, regarding the consequences of large families like advertisement in
media
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the media
.
Finally
, It should provide free school studies to the
poor and
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poor, and
if possible need to encourage them by scholarship's. In Conclusion, Each and everyone of us, should feel responsible and need to participate, for elimination of the cause.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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