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The pie chart indicates the number of British students at one university located in England who were capable of communicating in another
language
 different from their mother tongue dividing the result into six main categories; no other
language
, French only, German only, Spanish only, another
language
, and
two
 other languages. The data
was taken
Suggestion
were taken
 from
two
 specific years; 2000 and 2010.
Firstly
, from the graph related to 2000 information, it can be said that the biggest quantity of students spoke only Spanish
besides
 English with a 30%, and the minimum amount of students were categorized as being able to talk German and
two
 other languages, both categories obtained the same 10% respectively.
On the other hand
, in 2010, there were changes related to the results for each category.
For instance
,
Spanish
Suggestion
the Spanish
 continued to be the most spoken
language
 with a 5% growth in comparison to 2000.
Also
, there were not only
two
 categories tied to have less amount of students fitting on it, but three; no other
language
, German only, and
two
 other languages.
However
, the kept the same result of 10% of students as in 2000 being the lowest
rate
Suggestion
rating
.
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