Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? Which other types of job should be highly paid? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It is often said that people working in entertainment are paid so much money. Many people believe that
entartainers
should gain a person who tries to please or amuse
entertainers
this
vary
amount of money. Others, Suggestion
variable
however
, think that there are many important profession worth to be paid like entertainers or even more. While this
point of view has value, I believe that paying this
giant number
is kind of Suggestion
amount
exaggarated
.
In my opinion, professions represented as greater than is true or reasonable
exaggerated
such
as Scientistics
, doctors, professors and even school teachers should be paid almost same as entertainers. a person with advanced knowledge of one or more sciences
scientists
Firstly
, the time and effort those people spending their life in to prove
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life to prove
theroeis
and inventions to wealth and facilitate the human beings or as a well-substantiated explanation of some aspect of the natural world; an organized system of accepted knowledge that applies in a variety of circumstances to explain a specific set of phenomena
theories
doctores
saving human a licensed medical practitioner
doctors
lifes
. a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
Secondly
, indevidiuals
like a human being
individuals
individual
professores
and teachers worth big salaries and the highest ranking position for a university academic
professors
this
is due to the fact that those people generate and teach our future generations which will be one
day a step stone in countries developmental progress. Thirdly
, there income does not reflect the amount of work they do. For instance
, a top star movie like Anglina Jolie can easily make more than one
million dollar by acting a one
single film. This
giant amount of money hard or may be never be reached
by many people in their whole life no matter how hard they are Suggestion
never be reached
work
.
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On the other hand
, Many will agree with the over pais
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because of reasons related to that paying for these professions depending on how much they will profit the producer organization per minute. As well as entertainment now consider to be a person trained to compete in sports
athletes
one
of the main modern manufactring
to increase the economy.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that entertainment is an important aspect in our the act of making something (a product) from raw materials
manufacturing
life but
the overrated paying for entertainers could Accept comma addition
life, but
has
positives and Suggestion
have
negatives
aspects. Suggestion
negative
However
, in my view the negatives outweigh the positives.Submitted by Rania on
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