Some people fail in school, but end up being succesful in life. Why do you think this is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life?

Faillure
Suggestion
Failure
Filler
Fuller
is present in the
schoolar
of or relating to the doctrine that rejects religion and religious considerations
secular
past of many
succesful
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
adults. Taking success as professional and
finantial
involving financial matters
financial
acheivements
the action of accomplishing something
achievements
,
this
essay is going to present the main reason for
this
happens and what is the key to
trive
grow vigorously
thrive
drive
in those areas of life. Some children do not adapt
weel
(often used as a combining form) in a good or proper or satisfactory manner or to a high standard ('good' is a nonstandard dialectal variant for 'well')
well
to conventional methods to measure their
knowledge
Accept comma addition
knowledge, such
such
as tests, which are used in the vast majority of
educatonal
relating to the process of education
educational
institutes. They can develop high levels of stress and
axiety
(psychiatry) a relatively permanent state of worry and nervousness occurring in a variety of mental disorders, usually accompanied by compulsive behavior or attacks of panic
anxiety
before sitting an
exame
a set of questions or exercises evaluating skill or knowledge
exam
.
As a result
, some of them have
low
Suggestion
lower
grades and are no motivated at all to study.
For instance
, recent
researchs
systematic investigation to establish facts
researches
research
show that anxious and stressed students are likely to perform poorly in school assessments.
In other words
, failing at school does not mean lack of learning. Having said that. I am going to tell,
acording
(followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
to my opinion, what is the most important thing to have a
briliant
of surpassing excellence
brilliant
career. Determination is the key for success. When people are aware of where they want to be, it is easy to discover what they need to do to reach that place.
However
, it does not mean that it is going to be easy to go through all the way along.
For example
, Bill Gates received many no before opening his own company. In
additon
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
, he was considered a
fail
Suggestion
failed
student at school.
Nevertheless
, he did not give up
of
Suggestion
on
his ideas.
This
is why he
trived
tested and proved useful or correct
tried
to
Suggestion
with
success. To conclude,
schools
Suggestion
school
results cannot always tell how successful someone will be. For
this
reason, teachers and parents have to support children and encourage them to go ahead with their dreams despite of negative grades. Confidence and determination are essential in their future adulthood.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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