The plan below show the layout of a university’s sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

The two plans
the architectural framework of the university sports
and its future plan of up gradation. In present time, the university sports
lack many facilities which are planned to construct in it to provide students more facilities regarding athletic and physical activities. The sports
currently have
currently has
is currently having
s single pool about 25m in length with a changing room in the west and a seating area in the east. In future plan, along with
pool a new leisure pool will be constructed with its separate changing room in the west of
the sports centre
a sports centre
sports centres
. Two outdoor courts, one in the east and
in the west will no longer be there in future plan
a single sport hall will be made in the east. The gym will be expanded as
to the current one, along with the construction of two dance studios
the east wall of the
. One more changing room will be built
the south wall along a café too.
In addition
, a sports shop will
be constructed.
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