Inspite of the advances made in agriculture , many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Now a
days
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day
, agriculture and cultivation are becoming very advance after the revolutionary invention in mechanical sciences. Beside the increase production of crops, many people in
this
world are starving. An analysis will be made about the causes and the possible solutions will be suggested in
this
essay. In the
third
world countries poverty is one of the biggest
challenge
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challenges
in their aim of development. Due to which poor people have not sufficient money to buy
food
for them and for their children.
This
cause them to starve resulting in serious health issues
such
as malnutrition. Another possible cause of hunger would be
unavailability
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the unavailability
of
food
items for
poor population
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the poor population
poor populations
.
For instance
, in Thar,
city
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a city
in Pakistan children
are
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is
severely malnourished because of unavailability of grains and essential crops in that area,
although
Pakistan’s major economy
depend
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depends
upon agriculture, still people at
Thar
pointing out something
that
their
have to face hunger. Local governments and international organizations should pay attention in
this
matter and make certain policies to enhance the affordability and availability of
food
for poor people. A check and balance system should be launched in
market
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the market
for price management and provide subsidies to essential
food
items like grains, pulses, sugar, oil and dairy products. Special utility stores
should be establish
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should establish
, where special discount should be offered for needy people on
food
items.
This
essay
analyzed
examined carefully and methodically; broken down for consideration of constituent parts
analysed
the possible causes of hunger and suggested practical solutions for them. It is hoped that these measures are put into the action for
betterment
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the betterment
of poor people, their nutritional and
food
requirements.
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