Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is argued by some people that all their earnings should be used for their personal needs and not taxed by the government. I disagree with

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notion because taxation

ensure

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ensures

equality in many societies and it is a means by which the government provide essential services and infrastructures. One major reason benefit of taxation is that it

promote

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promotes

equality.

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, the

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pay

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payer

paid

by people in many countries is proportional to their earnings.

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, high

income

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earners pay more taxes to the authority while with only few exceptions, low

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earners and senior citizens pay lesser taxes.

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, there

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high

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a high tax

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on luxury goods commonly use by the affluent in many countries, whereas, individuals who do not have a regular

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are excepted from certain taxes.

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has resulted in a more even society.

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, taxes are needed for the development of infrastructure and the provision of essential services.

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is due to the fact that most governments pay for these public infrastructures and services from

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incomes.

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, in many countries, the state pay for security, health care and social amenities from the

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it receives.

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, if the government does not receive

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revenue, it would neither be able to pay for important services nor develop public infrastructure. In conclusion, I disagree with the view that people should keep their

income

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rather than pay

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because taxation

ensure

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ensures

equility

the quality of being the same in quantity or measure or value or status

equality

in many countries and it is the main means governments fund public services and infrastructures. Efforts geared towards promoting these merits should be encouraged.

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Topic Vocabulary:

contribute
welfare
public services
progressive taxation
distribution of wealth
civic duty
social cohesion
tax evasion
economic disparities
social unrest
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