The company you work for has decided to close the cafeteria as the staff is not using it much. You are not happy with the decision. Write a letter to the director: - Give reasons of low usage - How will it affect the staff - Suggest ways to improve it

Dear Sir, I am Lovish Kakkar. I am currently employed in the Accounting and Finance Department of your esteemed organisation. I am writing
this
letter to bring your attention to a recent decision of our management to close the
cafeteria
. My colleagues and I do not agree with
this
development and would like you to reconsider it. To give more details, there are a few reasons why the
cafeteria
has been used less.
To begin
with, there is a problem of cleanliness in the
premise
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because it is not cleaned regularly. Apart from that, the coffee machine has not been working for almost two months now.
Lastly
, the microwave and dishwasher are prone to damage and only work irregularly.
Due to
all these reasons, very less people use the
cafeteria
. The decision to close it will adversely affect the rest of us who regularly use it to have lunch. Some employees like me, who do not own a car will have no place to go to have our food.
Moreover
, the
cafeteria
is the only place where we can meet and talk comfortably with our co-workers. To give my humble opinion,
instead
of closing the lunch room, we shall work to improve it. If the management can ensure cleanliness and install new electronic appliances in the
cafeteria
, attendance will increase surely. I hope for a careful consideration of our request. Yours faithfully, Lovish
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Ensure to include all the necessary contact information for a formal letter.
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Try to provide more specific suggestions for improvement, such as names of appliances or detailed cleanliness routines.
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Consider breaking down large paragraphs into smaller ones for better readability.
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The letter maintains a respectful and formal tone throughout, which is appropriate for addressing the director.
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The structure of the letter is logical, with clear introduction, body and conclusion.
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Each paragraph addresses a single point clearly and effectively, improving readability.
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