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Today more and more people are using mobile phones and computers. Thus, people are losing the ability to communicate face to face. To what extent, do you agree or disagree

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Mobile phone and computers are increasingly used by people in the modern
life
. It is
agued
present reasons and arguments
argued
urged
agreed
 that
this
 practice leads to the losing of
face
 to
face
communication
 ability of the users. I partly agree with
this
 idea depending on how people
use
 these technologies in their
life
. On the one hand, when people
use
 cell phones and computers, their
face
 to
face
communication
 skills can be
losen
Suggestion
lost
losing
loosen
loosened
 because of some main reasons.
Firstly
, when they
use
 the high-tech equipments to play games, watch movies, read
news
Suggestion
the news
, make a phone call,
then
 they spend most of their free time with their own entertainment routines without communicating with their relatives or friends. As the result, they rarely talk with other people, and time to time, they may lose their ability to effectively communicate in
face to
Suggestion
a face to face way
face
 way.
Secondly
, some people tend to
use
 their smart phones and computers connecting internet all day as a daily activity to satisfy their own dire needs in their own unreal world. They are more and more dependent on their own social network only
availble
obtainable or accessible and ready for use or service
available
 on the internet and forget the real
life
 with their own relations.
Thus
, they
can not
can not
cannot
 stand talking with other people and
then
 lose their ability to communicate naturally in the real
life
.
On the other hand
, mobile phone and computer can
also
 help people gain some valuable skills
on
Suggestion
in
for
 communicating with other people, even
face
 to
face
 interaction skills.
smart
Suggestion
Smart
 phones and computer connecting internet enable users to conduct video chat which allows people
see
Suggestion
to see
 and talk to each other exactly as what they can do when facing in the real
life
.
In addition
, people draw inspiration from interesting TV programs that teach them how to communicate well in the real
life
. With the development of high-tech education game shows, people
feel
cause to fall by or as if by delivering a blow
fell
 easily to assess a world of knowledge and experience in
communication
 activities. In conclusion, computers and cell phones may lead to losing of
communication
 skills when people have
face
 to
face
 meeting.
However
, the high-tech equipments
also
 help to improve the skills depending mostly on how they
use
 the assets in their daily
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • interpersonal skills
  • overreliance
  • digital communication platforms
  • convenience
  • efficiency
  • social bonds
  • enhance
  • bridging long distances
  • fostering connections
  • age groups
  • adept
  • integrating
  • landscape
  • emotional intelligence
  • nuances
  • striking a balance
  • limitations
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