Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go the cinema.Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays many

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Nowadays, many

people watch movies on their mobiles and iPads

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so they do not have to go to the

theater

a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented

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anymore.

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certain people watch movies in the

theater

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because they believe

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is more enjoyable than anywhere else. I agree with people who say that watching movies in their mobiles is more fun than in the

theater

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. In my opinion, many people are busy all the

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time, which

means it is difficult to watch films with friends in the

cinema

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.If we use our phones or iPads, we can watch films together.

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people pay a cheap price for a movie channel

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as Netflix rather than

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a ticket. They do not need to worry about walking to their seat in the dark when they are late for a movie. They can just watch it when they are free.

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, you are able to watch a love story movie with your partner when the children are asleep. People

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can watch classic old movies any time and

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which are not in the

cinema

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, people who watch movies in the

cinema

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think it is more enjoyable

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because there is a large amount of professional equipment

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as a large screen and high quality sound system.

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is why some people still want to go to the

cinema

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some 3D and 4D movies are only on at the cinemas. People do not have

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facilities at home or on their mobiles. It is

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a good family activity

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so the children will be very happy if their parents take them to the

cinema

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. In conclusion

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people use different ways to watch and enjoy movies. I still enjoy watching movies on my mobile.In my opinion

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the advantages of watching movies at home outweigh the advantages of going to the

cinema

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