Some people think the government funding should not be used for supporting art and culture, while others think supporting cultural activities may be beneficial for the population and the culture. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some folks argue that the

state

should not sponsor the cultural activities, because many other areas need government funding,

whereas

, many are of the notion that funding these festivals may be helpful.

This

essay will discuss both views and give my opinion that the executive's sponsorship is necessary for promoting traditional values and

also

for

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well being

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of the society. On the one hand,those against the financial support of the

state

argue that there are more pressing issues for the authorities to pay attention to.

Firstly

, many

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nations do not have enough supplies to feed their people.If a poor country diverts the resources towards

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events,

then

a common man will die of hunger

due to

food shortage.

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basic education and health are the two key areas requiring a major share

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the budget.If the individuals are healthy and have

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minimum

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, only

then

they will be able to enjoy

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literary activities.

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, in Pakistan, only half of the population is literate,

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remaining half looking towards the national assembly for educational

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for them to obtain primary

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.

On the other hand

, a large fraction of

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that the funds for cultural functions should be provided by the

state

as it helps in propagating the national art.By contributing a small amount of money, a country can preserve its heritage.

For instance

, many dramas and theatres

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Pakistan are popular in the world

due to

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ownership of the national TV running these shows.

In addition

, these programs are a source of mental relaxation for the populace.

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means that if people get a chance to listen to traditional music after

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work routine, they will retain

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good mental health.To exemplify, whenever, I feel tired after long working hours, I listen to the local music channel that helps me recoup my energy. In conclusion,

although

many sectors require priority funding from the government exchequer , I believe that some of

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should be allocated to art and culture for the sake of preserving national traditions and for

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of the mental health of the masses.