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Nowadays , many people are spending less and less time at home , What are the causes of it? What are the effects of this on individuals as well as on the society?

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It is the fact that
presently majority
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the presently majority
 of the people are not
spening
the act of spending or disbursing money
spending
 enough
time
 with their family. There are several reasons for
this
 situation
such
 as busy work schedules or social media and
also
 few visible influences too. Both the aspects are explained in the ensuring paragraphs. Discussing the reasons, the most common is people's busy work schedules.
This
 is because nowadays companies are assigning more tasks to
people which
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people, which
 cannot be completed in normal office hours eventually employees are spending more
time
 at office including weekends
.
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.
For instance
, my friend who is working in IT company works for 10 hours daily including
saturday
the seventh and last day of the week; observed as the Sabbath by Jews and some Christians
Saturday
study
. The other cause is influence of friends and social media.By
this
 what I mean is many youngsters are spending
majority
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the majority
a majority
 of their
time
 in front of mobile phones or they would be roaming with friends.
Furthermore
, those who addicted towards bad habits
also
 tend to stay away from home. The mentioned causes have some impacts too. The foremost effect would be seen
on
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in
 family relationships. Due to the less quality
time
 spending with family relationship is getting spoiled day by day.
For example
,
divourse
the legal dissolution of a marriage
divorce
 rates are getting higher presently because partners are not spending quality
time
 together. The other repercussion is lack of social skills and
behavioral
of or relating to behavior
behavioural
 issues among
yougsters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
.
since
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Since
 they are not spending
time
 with their
family they become
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family, they become
family as they become
 unaware of family values and morals. In conclusion,
although
 people cannot spend their
time
 with family due to factors like busy work schedules and friends
,
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,
 we should make sure that we are
speding
the act of spending or disbursing money
spending
 quality
time
 with our family members to live a happier life.
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