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SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT SPORT TEACHES CHILDREN HOW TO COMPETE, WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT CHILDREN LEAN TEAM WORK. DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

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By engaging our self in any sort of sports
activity it
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activity, it
 may increase our
health
 in a positive manner and our mental strength
also
 boost. Children should
also
 know that how to be part of any competition and achieve the goal. And get to know how to be survive them self in a team work. Nowadays people are having
health
 issues due to their tough daily routine and not having proper exercises and peace. So many peoples use their vehicle for moving from
one one
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
 place to another
instead
 of going
their
in or at that place
there
 by walk or not having involvement in any sports activity due to
this
 we people are having severe
health
 issues. We should learn from
this
 that our
childrens
a young person of either sex
children
 or upcoming generations should not face
this
 problem so we have to engage themselves in any physical game so that they feel
relax
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relaxed
 and learn how to compete others by
doing
the act that results in something coming to be
making
 extra efforts and behave smartly to defeat the competitor. Most of the time it has been observed that parents provide electronic games
to
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for
 their children due to
this
 their child gets weak physically and emotionally as well, he/ she doesn’t know how to over-come the stress
in
Suggestion
of
 losing the game. In
this
 way children can’t learn the team work.
However
 educational
institutions like
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institutions, like
 most of the schools are engaging their students in physical sports activities like cricket / hockey / baseball / football so their student
health
 remains good and he / she learns how to be defeat others and learn to work in a team.
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