You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Write a letter to someone you know who live there. In your letter ask them for help finding accommodation tell them where you would like to live tell them the type of place you are looking for

Dear Annie, Hope you are doing fine. It’s been a while since we have written to each other. You will be glad to hear that I will move to
London
soon to take a job that I have been offered at Liberty Global. I will reach
London
in a few weeks. As you know, I have never been to
London
and I am hoping you could help me in finding suitable accommodation. Though my company has arranged a
studio
apartment
for the
first
two weeks, I will have to vacate the place after that. My preference would be to live close to my workplace, which is in central
London
, as it would save a lot of time. If I could get something near the tube station and the marketplace, that would be great. I am mostly looking for a furnished
studio
apartment
. If the
studio
apartment
is not available, I would not mind sharing a flat with a girl. But the
apartment
should be spacious with
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ventilation facility. My budget is around $1000
pound
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for the
studio
apartment
and half of that for the shared room. Do you think I will get something in that budget? I know you have a wide social circle there and would really appreciate your time to find me
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suitable accommodation. Looking forward to meeting you soon. Warm wishes,
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