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In many countries, a small number of people earn extremely high Some people believe that this is good for the country, but others think that governments should not allow salaries above a certain level. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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The financial remunerations of certain executive jobs are astronomically high in various countries. While many consider it beneficial for the
country
, others are of the view that
wage ceiling
Suggestion
the wage ceiling
 should be placed
for
Suggestion
in
 the working class. I am in complete accord with the former view. There are several advantages of High-paid jobs in a
country
.
Firstly
, Better salary is the demand of every working person in
this
 era of materialism. People burn their
mid night
12 o'clock at night; the middle of the night
midnight
 oil to get an opportunity to secure
such
 a job.
This
 creates a healthy competition amongst the working cream of a nation, which culminates into development of a hard working younger generation contributing well to the prosperity of their
country
.
Secondly
, High pays in the private sector will
also
 generate revenue for the government in terms of tax returns.
Finally
, Good salaries in
public service sector
Suggestion
the public service sector
public service sectors
 like doctors, Judges and police will encourage them to
put-in
Russian statesman chosen as president of the Russian Federation in 2000; formerly director of the Federal Security Bureau (born in 1952)
Putin
 maximum in their service to the nation, without any financial worries. In a stark contrast, People who are a
stanch
firm and dependable especially in loyalty
staunch
 supporter of ceiling upon the salaries of workers believe that large differences in salaries will create a class difference in the society. People who are less paid will be discouraged and
this
 will have a detrimental impact on over-all economy.
This
Accept comma addition
This, however
however
, is not correct as
ceiling
Suggestion
a ceiling
the ceiling
ceilings
 on the salaries will vanish the impetus to work hard. People will not work hard to achieve excellence as hard work will not be responded by an equivalent financial benefit. To conclude, I personally believe that there shouldn't be any level of salary rise and high-paid jobs are better of a
country
.
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