Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

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personalities are predefined, as an effect of our genes before our birth and it is impossible to change it. In my view, while I agree that

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character

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the character

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is inborn, it can be altered

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Character

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The character

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is the one, which is built, before birth genetically. An individual personality is directly related to his or her genes, developed pre-birth. People possess

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

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and attitude the same way of their parent’s

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and they react to different situations the exact way their parents do.

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to say, if a

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possesses

aggressive mind

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an aggressive mind

the aggressive mind

, it is highly likely that his or her parents would be short tempered. A recent survey by the International Institute of London,

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, showed that children who are polite in nature are highly likely, owing to their parents possessing

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attitude.

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, personality and

behavior

manner of acting or controlling yourself

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of an individual can be changed. A

person

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may have a certain type of

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manner of acting or controlling yourself

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in his or her

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, which may not be likable, but it can be altered through environment and guidance.

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is because people behave and react the same way they are taught.

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, spending time in better circumstances, a bad attitude can be converted to a good one. Research by Oxford University,

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, revealed that out of 100 students, 70 students abandoned their unhappy nature by spending time with happy people and learning about the importance of happiness in life. In conclusion,

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some believe that personality is a pre-existing thing, due to genes before birth, in my opinion,

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character

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the character

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can be modified, through guidance and environment.

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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274 words

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Our personalities are predetermined as a result of our genes before we are born and there is nothing that can be done to alter our character traits. To what extent do you agree?

Include an introduction and conclusion

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